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Post by Chameleon on Oct 13, 2006 0:30:57 GMT -5
READ SCRIPT BEFORE READING OTHER POSTS THEY MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS [/size] ya, so for video production, i had to write a script with the theme "good people do bad things". so i wrote this, and decided to show everyone. the writing is kinda messy, but surprisingly, that is the neatest i could write it, so tough luck if you cant read it. please, as a request. read the whole thing before posting, dont say something like "i got to here and couldnt take it" or "ugh your writing is too messy". just to keep it more or less ontopic and avoid useless posts. thanks. oh, and the format these are written in are...3 collums: location; action; dialogue
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Post by Fate|Speed[Y]Ninja on Oct 13, 2006 1:36:53 GMT -5
ooooooo its a rapeeeeeeee wad inspired u 2 write tis movie script? wad did u write bout rape lol, did u feel lyk doing it? anyways, its a little boring till it came to the man pinning her on the wall n at the end, the man dun really seem lyk hes first time.. its a bit strange but nice work anyways
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Post by :[DS]: Battôsai on Oct 13, 2006 12:02:49 GMT -5
I saw a play kinda like that once. It was really sad. Nyways, I just found the dialog at the beginning a bit awkward. Was that on purpose, cuz it was a first date?
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Post by Chameleon on Oct 13, 2006 20:54:32 GMT -5
speedy: basicly, my tought process was "ok, what is something bad? theft....murder...RAPE!" ya, i guess it wasnt really like it was his first time...but oh well
battosai: the dialogue is supposed to be a little awkward, but somewhat real, like just as "get to know each other" conversation.
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Post by :[DS]: Merox on Oct 13, 2006 21:06:04 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty good, hand writing was a little hard to read tho (not any better than my hand writting) but yea. I suppose I shouldn't of read speedys post before I read your script, 'cause then I knew what it was about.
So this was like a blind date? They haven't met each other before? Like Batto said, the begining was a bit akward.
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wolfman14
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Post by wolfman14 on Oct 14, 2006 1:39:39 GMT -5
Too lazy to read it, so i just say HooRah! (good job boyo)
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Post by Fate|Speed[Y]Ninja on Oct 14, 2006 8:45:11 GMT -5
please, as a request. read the whole thing before posting Too lazy to read it, so i just say HooRah! (good job boyo)
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